Flash Fiction – Part 2

You know the drill. Go to Rochelle’s Addicted to Purple site. Look at the weekly picture and write a 100 word story about it.

Copyright -Rochelle Wisoff-Fields



Up and down, down and up, that’s all I’ve done almost since that Otis guy invented my older brother. It can be boring. There are those times when I just want to try sideways for a change.

OWW! Watch that thumb, fella. Push the button gently! You don’t have to mash it. I won’t move any more quickly. I’ve been to the fifth floor; it’s boring.

Oh no, here comes “The Kid.” You know, we don’t have to stop at every floor! Where’s your mother?

I think I’ll unhitch my cables, and just go lurk in the basement for a while.


12 thoughts on “Flash Fiction – Part 2

  1. 1jaded1 says:

    This is the best! 101 words in the words of an elevator. You rock at this.


  2. whiteladyinthehood says:

    Archon, I think you have a knack for this! (the humor was great!)


  3. BrainRants says:

    Great take on this!


  4. aFrankAngle says:

    Love the elevator’s perspective! (and it made me chuckle). … Thanks for stopping by during my absence.


  5. Dear Archon,

    It appears that i missed this entry…probably due to my accidentally posting a day early this week…in welcoming you to Friday Fictioneers.

    Interesting POV. Good voice.




  6. So, I finally made it to your Flash Fiction bits. And I’m very happy to say that the destination is worth it. Prepare for an onslaught of commentary… 😉


    • Archon's Den says:

      Lay on, MacDuff. I’m tough enough…to take it.
      BTW; Sorry about the posts where photos had disappeared. In a blur of OCD, I thought I’d erase some from the WordPress cache to make room for new ones I was adding, not realizing that that would also remove them from posts they were anchored to. I quickly stopped when I realized what I was doing. You’re about the only person who’s gone far enough back to be affected. 😆


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