Flash Fiction #19

 

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A Mere Reflection

One of the reasons he had bought this house was the beautiful, big, gilt-framed mirror in the main bathroom.  It was really a “Lady’s Mirror,” but he liked it.

Every time he came in, he stopped and stared into it; not from ego, he didn’t frighten small children, but he was far from handsome.  It was as if he was staring into a different world.

Suddenly, yesterday, he found himself staring out.  How could that possibly happen?  His sister came in and looked around.  He shouted, but she left.  Could no-one see him?  How was he going to get out?

 

Go to Rochelle’s Addicted to Purple site, and use her Wednesday photo as a prompt to write a complete 100 word story

 

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35 thoughts on “Flash Fiction #19

  1. Oh my!! like the Twilight Zone!! very well penned!!

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  2. BrainRants says:

    Creepy, Archon. Good work.

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  3. Great creepy story.
    Claire

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  4. aFrankAngle says:

    A sense of creepy and the above Twilight Zone references are perfect.

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    • Archon's Den says:

      Perhaps, but we need Cliff’s Notes to understand Lewis Carroll, or perhaps not – eat this, drink that, smoke this stuff. If he published today, the DEA would be his most attentive customer. 😕

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  5. I would love to hear what happens next! Very interesting story, well done 🙂

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  6. draliman says:

    Oops, not just any old mirror, then. I’d also like to know what happens next. I wonder if he can move around in there or if he’s completely trapped?
    Nice story!

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    • Archon's Den says:

      Yeaah, he can’t be the only one trapped in there. Apparently a bachelor (only his sister searched for him), perhaps he could find a mirror-image girlfriend in there, if he walks around the horses.

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  7. Sorchia D says:

    Looking out or looking in–hard to tell sometimes. Sounds like it could be the beginning of an interesting day.

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  8. Dear Archon,

    Your story reflects creepiness at its finest. Helluva predicament. Well done.

    shalom,

    Rochelle

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  9. As our old daughter once famously said, “I never had a problem like that before.” I like the way you used the title to reflect (ha, ha) what was happening in the story. Not sure I want to go into the bathroom now.

    janet

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  10. Hmm, break the mirror? That might either free him or kill him.

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  11. The magic of mirrors. I love it. Well done.

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  12. What a bad place to be! So much for looking into and admiring the mirror.

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  13. Archon, Those mirrors this week are tricky. Good story and well written. 🙂 —Susan

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    • Archon's Den says:

      They’re tricky all the time. A handsome young lad like me walks in, and the mirror shows some chubby, dumpy, old dude. It’s not fair, I tell you!

      Did I remember to access your story this week? Or was I too busy looking in the mirror? 😕

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  14. cyanwrites says:

    *This* is what the button does :p

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  15. Great twist. You’re definitely on a roll with the flashes…

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