Flash Fiction #155


PHOTO PROMPT © Björn Rudberg


Who would have believed that Shangri-La would be located in the Black Hills of South Dakota?? Certainly not him, before he began his research.  The friends he’d been foolish enough to tell, all laughed at him.

Year by year the threads all came together, directly over this little peak. This was his third summer expedition, and he’d finally found a trail.  He remembered all the clues that claimed it could not be found or reached.

Proceeding carefully but confidently, suddenly this thing waddled out…. Was it an animal, a robot, an alien??  Perhaps he wouldn’t reach Shangri-La after all.


Go to Rochelle’s Addicted to Purple site and use her Wednesday photo as a prompt to write a complete 100 word story.

30 thoughts on “Flash Fiction #155

  1. Varad says:

    Love the ambiguous ending here… he might be hallucinating, I think.


  2. Sarah Ann says:

    Now what thing would that be? Great way you left this to the reader’s imagination to fill in the blanks.


  3. Kat Myrman says:

    I guess it depends on your definition of Shangri La. Something so elusive, when found, rarely is what we expect it to be, I’m thinking. 🙂


  4. Iain Kelly says:

    I went with a Shangri-La theme too, different but with equally frustrating results for those pursuing it!


  5. jillyfunnell says:

    A waddling thing is not how I imagine a resident of Shangri-La but maybe it’s a helpful guide? Good story.


  6. BrainRants says:

    They have the exact same warnings outside Area 51.


  7. 1jaded1 says:

    Red circles with a line crossing through the image are rarely a good thing.


    • Archon's Den says:

      All except the time the entitled young idiot stepped out the mall side door, and lit up, right beside the cigarette with the red line through it. I stopped and offered to explain the sign to him. He tossed it away, and followed me all the way to the electronics section of WalMart, to tell me that I had hurt his feelings. Boo-Hoo 😯


  8. Ooooh, suitably mysterious, considering it WAS the road to Shangri La.


  9. granonine says:

    Maybe the THING was all three!


  10. Dale says:

    There are some places we are just not meant to ever find…
    Fun one, Archon.


  11. Are there Yetis in South Dakota?


    • Archon's Den says:

      I don’t think so, nor any Bigfoots (Bigfeet??) either. If Trump finds out about this little one, he’ll start building a wall, and soon they’ll move up here to Canada. 😆


  12. lisarey1990 says:

    Loved the ending. Leaves you curious.


  13. johnlmalone says:

    good one. talk about synchronicity, I just put up a post yesterday about Shangri-la 🙂


    • Archon's Den says:

      In a random group of 30 people, there’s a 50% chance that two of them will have the same birthday. How many Fictioneers are there?? Kat Myrman and I wrote about going to the Black Hills of South Dakota. You and I both wrote about Shangri-La. 😳 Thanx for stopping by.

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